Doing

For the last reading task we had to critically review some of our classmates chapter and leave comments on each. I chose to read two of the people within my chapter, Aaron and Jack. Over the last week or so I've been reading over their chapters and leaving some feedback on the stucture of there paragraphs and how informative the piece is.

Both screenshots are pieces I've grabbed from Aaron's chapter which was the use of VR/AR in a medical field like Rehabilitation. 

The other screenshots are of Jack's chapter which is on the history of AR/VR.

Reviewing the chapters, both writers had great introductions and had a good balance of references throughout.